Wanted a bright summer day feel instead of the evening sky. Omitted the building since it's not my thing. But otherwise, I can't put my finger on what I'm not happy with this painting. Composition? Color? Depth?
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@dracula, thank you! I think there's not a great transition between the mountain and the forest. I'll be looking into other paintings to see how I can fix it to my liking.
Your mountain and waterfall are super. The shape of the lake is a bit confusing to my eye. The tree in the foreground doesn't seem to be reflecting light.
@jgoldes - that darned foreground tree!!! I have redone that foreground tree 10 times now. Lol. It's been a learning experience adding depth and shadows to a white canvas.
I've settled on an OK version of it. I'll try to upload the new version!
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I'm not sure what you don't like in the painting, but the mountain is superb! Excellent depth, shape, and color!